Saturday, February 13, 2010

A Cry

O mother don't fight
O father don't fight
Please don't get me
out of your sight

I'm your baby
whom you brought
into this world
You were overjoyed
and proud to be deserved



( I guess this is unfinished)
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4 comments:

  1. NICKFebruary 13, 2010 at 6:24 PM

    Yup sounds incomplete. add something more

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  2. My ExPeRiMeNtS wItH sAtYaApril 3, 2010 at 10:35 PM

    the poem is titled as cry .

    did the baby start to cry after the word "deserved"

    i think the poem is sort of incomplete

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  3. AjinkyaApril 4, 2010 at 1:08 AM

    This poem is about a boy who is in the 5 or 6 th grade and feeling quite neglected as his parents are constantly into quarreling with each other but they were overjoyed at the birth of their baby.Yes, i think it is not finished.

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  4. future for othersAugust 29, 2010 at 5:16 AM

    Complete the poem so that boy can convience his parents and always be in the shadow of their parents.

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