Hello! main Karthik bol raha hoon,Karthik

Saw KCK today and enjoyed it.It is written and directed by Vijay Lalwani and KCK is his first movie.Also,the dialogues too are written by him.The first half is amazing and was due to the fresh dialogues and Farhan Akhtar playing Karthik. Farhan was very real playing the character.Yes, he can act very well. Deepika was fine but movie is around Karthik. The scene in the first were karthik pities and cries over him really make the audience give sympathy to the character. Farhan and Deepika shared a great chemistry with fresh n crazy dialogues between the two.The music is good and you all know well how the songs are.

Now coming to the 2nd half, it also has  a fine story to tell but as the climax begin to unravel the movie slackens and the audience is quite bored awaiting the climax. This is mainly because you may already have guessed the climax because you've witnessed this before in a very nice movie.Now, I'm not unraveling much. But looking at the movie as a whole its worth a watch and you'll enjoy it. My ratings 2.75/5

Mann mein hai

likhna chahata hoon
par likhu kya
khojana chahata hoon
par mann mein hain kya
dil ki baat sunle o pyaare
yaad kar woh falsafe sunahare purane
Ajab si kashmakash mein na tu pad
Al iz wel bol ke kaam pe chal.

Saaz ya Sazaa

 
Tu mujhe  koee sazaa na de
aaj sirf jeene ka mazaa de
ye din mujhe hain bada pyara
kisike aankho ka main hoon
chamakta sitaara
raah take hain meri koee
ruswa na mujhe use karna
use jaroorat hain meri
tu mujhe baad mein fursat mein mil
maine abhi dekha hi kya hain
thoda kamjor hain mera dil
jaldi hain mujhe jaana
tu mujhe baad mein mil
khush reh O pyaare
mujhse keh raha hain
mera dil



 Here, the poem depicts the pursuit for happiness,for good luck of the protagonist. The protagonist meets with an ill luck and confidently accepts it but humorously ask it to leave him for that particular time and meet him when he's got plenty of time and nothing much important to lose.

Ab bacha hi kya hain......jeene ki yahi wajah hain

An hindi song written by me. hope you all will like it.

Ab bacha hi kya hain.....jeene ki yahi wajah hain

ab bacha hi kya hain
ab bacha hi kya hain
saath tha jo, chhuth gaya
raasta tha woh gum hua
yaad tha jo ruswa hua
haan ye kya hua
haan ye kya hua
kaash yeh pal kabhi na aata
hum bhi woh suhane pal abbhi jiya karlete
magar abb
bacha hi kya hain
haa bacha hi kya hain
Par shayad
phir savera hoga
tumhara saath dobara naseeb hoga
dosti jud jayegi
raasta mil jayega
aur jeeneki yahi wajah hain
haan yahi wajah hain

My Paramour

This poem has shades of lust. Yes, you read it right .But it is different in a particular way than what you are/may be thinking right now. As it is said that excess of anything is dangerous, the poem goes on the same lines and is about recognising and tring to overcome that devil. At the end of the poem you must have understood the real and complete meaning. Well,no offences intended in writing the poem.I priorly apologise if anyone is uncomfortable after reading.Well, guys and gals you can digest this. Enjoy!! The poem  is titled My Paramour. Btw, Paramore is one of the bands I listen to. Well here is the poem for you.

 

My Paramour

I was lonely and unloved
eagerly waiting to be loved

You came into my life
to vanish this sorrow
But you kept on loving me
like there's no tomorrow

You were there for me like a shadow
but now I think it is life
that I should borrow

I'm losing my life because of you
though others can't see and recognise you
You my paramour is nobody else
but my other real self
  

Many days back I heard  a song of the 90s which talked about the 'prime object' of the poem and then I also googled the side effects of excess of this object.This inspired me to write this poem.


P.S. Here I don't want to malign the word 'love' . It just has a different shade to it. It is also one of the most sacred words for me but it aptly replaced the original word and as always it was done for Euphemism's sake.

Love the way you love me (Song)

O baby

I love the way I hold you

I love the way you look back at me

love the way you smile

love the way you talk to me 

love the way you sing

and love your sweet sounding voice

love the way you're in my arms

love the way you're on my back

and love the way you're behind during a ride

You can't measure my love for you

But you are the one who made my love sound true

I can't live ever without you

O I love you, I love you

I love you a lot my guitar

I love the way you love me O my guitar

love the way you love me my guitar

Thoughts.....

These thoughts I wrote nearly a year ago during a class and think that they need to be included here.I don't know whether they make a poem.This appears in my orkut profile also.

I dream of this, I dream of that
I dream of what-not and
what-what
The future seems calling me
I'm uncertain about the present
think of what I have done
where have the enthusiam and
creativity gone
which I possessed in the past
I want those two same now
for I have to transcend
the regularities
to set new vistas,
I want to be free,
I want to follow my passion
for there my heart belongs

A Cry

O mother don't fight
O father don't fight
Please don't get me
out of your sight

I'm your baby
whom you brought
into this world
You were overjoyed
and proud to be deserved



( I guess this is unfinished)

MySong - Going to the Himalayas!

the mountains gonna be with me there
the nature's gonna be with me there
some strangers & rangers gonna be with me there
I'm going
O Poo! I'm going
to the Himalayas

there, I'm gonna make the cloud a friend
the blue sky,the tall trees
and the scenic mesmerizing beauty my girlfriends
Will listen to the opera of the birds and wind
also will dive into the Ganges to pray for all
my fellow beings
It's always great to climb the shoulders
of the Himalayas
O Himalayas,O Himalayas
I'm coming to you
my mighty Himalayas

MyPoem- Oh,you pink butterflies!

Oh, you butterflies are so beautiful
marvelous, ecstatic,
aesthetic and wonderful
but I gaze at you being so fearful

I dream of the one amongst you
every morning and night
My joy would be doubled
if you give me a sight
Not want to chase you
but adore your charismatic flight
Also the gaiety surrounds me
when I'm far around thee

I'm ain't close to you
for there's reasons being might
Nevertheless,I know you'll come to me
with a smile
on one such lovely moonlight


Here, Pink Butterflies represents a group of girls and the protagonist is infatuated to one amongst them but at the moment don't want to express his feelings to the girl.

My Poem- Confessions of a vivacious whore. (My masterpiece uptill now).

I sleep the lonely nights
with a well known stranger by my side
daylight breaks,the morning awakes
and I'm myself,a girl who is like any other
waiting for my man
to complete my life
to give me joy and happiness
and also memorable nights
he'll take me to a whole new world
where there will be numerous colors
except- red
then there will be me,him and our
sweet little children
this is no utopia for me but my
life's desire
for I'm waiting for my man
to complete my life and be
by my side

My Song/Poem- Alcoholisation....Confessions of an alcoholic

You can try to tempt me
And persuade me
For I'm battling the moonshine of the toddy
Felt the pain
Cherished the agony
Rented in the 'state' and been a slave
To this thing said to be as a shapeless matter

Body is weakening
Affluency is decreasing
and Close-ones departing
and, and I'm left
with a bottle
with no shapeless matter
This,this is due to the thing
I call...........alcoholisation

My version of Come As You Are.

come
as you are
don't delay
it is being late
waiting here
for you to come
in my life
that is stagnant
and needs a catalyst
to accelerate
you'll make
all my dreams
come true
i don't know why this i said
but yea its true
for you dear
my heart's craving
for you dear
my eye's searching
Yes i know you'll come
there ain't no inhibitions
come as you r
i need you as you are
i need you as you are